Take a look at sections 4, 5, and 6 of Morgner’s story. John Updike once said “I love the middle — it’s where everything happens.” Think about that as you consider and write down answers to the following…
1. What kind of narrative do we get right after “Your place or mine? Mine.”? What are we expecting? Why don’t we get it?
2. React to this first sexual encounter. What words in particular surprise you?
5. what tension gets created in section 5? What’s the problem? are we in scene or in narrative description? Explain how this is working.
6. what physical responses does Morgner choose in sections 5 and 6 to show how the protagonist’s emotions are changing? Name at least 2.
Now look at the Tawada stories:
1. In “Canned Foreign” there’s a sort of almost scene on p.3. what’s the “turn”? What does the protagonist “realize”?
2. Where are the “turns” in “The Talisman”? (hint — they happen about halfway through the story). Name 2.